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kissing_cate_barlow

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PostSubject: angelita entierro   Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:23 am

crimson drops and daisy petals
in the meadow are found
senses strengthen
a gained new sight
into the world unknown

echoes ring and people cherish
all the tenderness around
do not touch me
here I cringe
lying on the ground

eyes that glitter and mesmerize
hold you where you are
unbeknownst you pause
and then the lights go out


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PostSubject: Re: angelita entierro   Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:31 am

O_o

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PostSubject: Re: angelita entierro   Sat Sep 06, 2008 12:37 am

what is it bad?
I think it's one of my best.
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PostSubject: Re: angelita entierro   Sat Sep 06, 2008 8:22 am

*claps*
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PostSubject: Re: angelita entierro   Sat Sep 06, 2008 1:03 pm

-bows gracefully then trips and falls on face-
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PostSubject: Re: angelita entierro   Sat Sep 06, 2008 1:17 pm

no. ish not bad.

google eyes means i was intrigued

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PostSubject: Re: angelita entierro   Sat Sep 06, 2008 1:30 pm

I was GOING to type something, but then my stupid cat jumped on the keyboard.

And now she's climbing into my lap.

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PostSubject: Re: angelita entierro   Sat Sep 06, 2008 10:21 pm

I love you thnx i love this one
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PostSubject: Re: angelita entierro   Wed Nov 26, 2008 1:41 pm

Awesome job chickie. I think we have a beginning for Angelita! Ish cool!
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